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lonely1 (Free verse) by corinacorrie
waiting for goals unattainable,
and the secret known as you,
speech intoxicates dew soaked nights
to hold summer in the wind
lonely one be with heart
as life cuts its narrow path
lovers forgotten wounds unchanging
scaring the canvas of you
the mourning drops of rain
against your window fade
longing for the sun- light pure
to drift and take you away
lonely one be with comfort
as you dream your lovesick dreams
know while love has left you bleeding
you aren't alone in thought
and in your solitude may you find
yourself and an identity true
society has dug your hole deep
lost as you thought you were
lonely one be with faith
as you sit and cry alone
darkness clouds the bitter world's hue
do you ever think of me
soul searching through my heart
venus shining bright, dark sky
vastness is too far the world is wide
and you are out there, somewhere
lonely one be with me
let us share our sympathies
to face the cold world together
and know you'll ease my pain
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12350
Posted: January 22, 2003 4:00 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2003 4:00 PM PST
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