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lonely1 (Free verse) by corinacorrie
waiting for goals unattainable, and the secret known as you, speech intoxicates dew soaked nights to hold summer in the wind lonely one be with heart as life cuts its narrow path lovers forgotten wounds unchanging scaring the canvas of you the mourning drops of rain against your window fade longing for the sun- light pure to drift and take you away lonely one be with comfort as you dream your lovesick dreams know while love has left you bleeding you aren't alone in thought and in your solitude may you find yourself and an identity true society has dug your hole deep lost as you thought you were lonely one be with faith as you sit and cry alone darkness clouds the bitter world's hue do you ever think of me soul searching through my heart venus shining bright, dark sky vastness is too far the world is wide and you are out there, somewhere lonely one be with me let us share our sympathies to face the cold world together and know you'll ease my pain

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12350
Posted: January 22, 2003 4:00 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2003 4:00 PM PST
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