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pisces (Free verse) by crin
i'll never take my eyes from you
i'll wipe your breath off the mirror
can you feel me on your back
there's no such thing as too close for comfort
the air as thick as honey
your eyes valium caressed
sticking together through our clothing
my hand gliding across your surface
thick-skinned in places they inflicted damage
i can feel how you wear these memories
i can take you under
i can lick your wounds
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10195
Posted: January 22, 2003 1:08 AM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2003 1:08 AM PST
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