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pisces (Free verse) by crin
i'll never take my eyes from you i'll wipe your breath off the mirror can you feel me on your back there's no such thing as too close for comfort the air as thick as honey your eyes valium caressed sticking together through our clothing my hand gliding across your surface thick-skinned in places they inflicted damage i can feel how you wear these memories i can take you under i can lick your wounds

Up the ladder: Jewel Of The Heart
Down the ladder: Memories

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10190
Posted: January 22, 2003 1:08 AM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2003 1:08 AM PST
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