|
|
Can You Hear Me? (Free verse) by x311
Your face is there in my dreams
Haunting me from the great beyond
You know how much I miss you
So many tears I cried when you left
I never got to tell you farewell
I wanted to say it while you could still hear me
But I waited too long
Everything else seemed so important
You would always be there
I never thought you'd leave me so young
If only I had another day
To tell you how much you meant to me
And how much love I had for you
I'm so sorry I couldn't do it earlier
When I could see you eye to eye
But please hear me now
As I cry to you a tearful goodbye
-Your friend,
Rick
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
0 | 0 |
9 |
|
0 | 1 |
8 |
|
0 | 0 |
7 |
|
0 | 0 |
6 |
|
0 | 0 |
5 |
|
0 | 1 |
4 |
|
1 | 1 |
3 |
|
1 | 1 |
2 |
|
0 | 1 |
1 |
|
1 | 1 |
0 |
|
1 | 0 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.1
Overall Rank: 13316
Posted: July 9, 2002 10:52 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 10:52 AM PDT
View voting details
163 view(s)
|