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Can You Hear Me? (Free verse) by x311
Your face is there in my dreams Haunting me from the great beyond You know how much I miss you So many tears I cried when you left I never got to tell you farewell I wanted to say it while you could still hear me But I waited too long Everything else seemed so important You would always be there I never thought you'd leave me so young If only I had another day To tell you how much you meant to me And how much love I had for you I'm so sorry I couldn't do it earlier When I could see you eye to eye But please hear me now As I cry to you a tearful goodbye -Your friend, Rick

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.1
Overall Rank: 13311
Posted: July 9, 2002 10:52 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 10:52 AM PDT
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