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but so tasty (Free verse) by teacup Oh how my teeth hurt.
And are fuzzy to boot.
On my desk there is a colorful mountain of trash,
I look at it fondly as in its younger days it brought me such joy.
My stomach churns.
My tongue tickles.
Right now it feels 16.0 ounces just wasn't enough.
But in a few minutes,
I know it will feel like too much.
Up the ladder:
Myself
Down the ladder:
SP
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Posted: January 10, 2003 10:01 PM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2003 10:01 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9416 103 view(s)
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