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but so tasty

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jan 2003 · 0 comments

Oh how my teeth hurt. And are fuzzy to boot. On my desk there is a colorful mountain of trash, I look at it fondly as in its younger days it brought me such joy. My stomach churns. My tongue tickles. Right now it feels 16.0 ounces just wasn't enough. But in a few minutes, I know it will feel like too much.

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