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Hanging Glass (Other) by mindsigns
Far above the streetlight glare
I'm staring out and waiting...
knowing your shadow
Though your black umbrella dims my veiw
I know it's you.
Make-up, run down, not caused by the rain.
Did you see me up here?
Have you seen me before?
but then you stop, untouched and refrained
My fingers press upon the empty scene
stained by love before my being.
I can hear your footsteps echo,
slowly beating out the night.
And there you are,
washing away the contents of the road,
withering down.... my lovely rose
Looking up, the hanging glass above my life,
Waiting for sudden movement.
Can you see the hanging glass
dropping down in pieces between the breeze?
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.285714
Weighted score: 5.345782
Overall Rank: 3405
Posted: January 6, 2003 11:10 AM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2003 11:10 AM PST
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great job