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An Honest Love (Free verse) by GTK
They said it was impossible, I turned around and tried. They said I couldn't do it, I cheated and I lied. They said that I'd be hurt, I gathered up my heart. They said it was an act, I soon played my part. They said I should give up, I continued to carry on. They said that I would leave her, I was soon to be gone. They said that I would fail, I never really passed. They said it was all my fault, I had never really asked.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11054
Posted: December 13, 2002 9:44 AM PST; Last modified: December 13, 2002 9:44 AM PST
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