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Dad (Free verse) by dniknam
Days go by I don't feel the same I wonder why I am to blame
Trap myself inside my head again
Can't get away from everything you have said
Now that your gone your still in my head
Quit yelling
I can't take anymore
Quit yelling
This is all just in my head
Quit yelling
I'm on the edge
Stop screaming dad just go to bed it won't be long and I hang instead
It wasn't me or was it something I said
Feel as though this is hell
I'm breaking up inside full of doubt beginning to wonder what this is
all about
Quit yelling
I can't take anymore
Quit yelling
This is all just in my head
Quit yelling
I'm on the edge
Though your gone from I remember every thing you said
Don't worry your still right there in my head
Reminding me of the failers I have met
I still hear those screams in the middle of the night
Closet case text book example of failer in life
Quit yelling
I can't take anymore
Quit yelling
This is all just in my head
Quit yelling
I'm on the edge
Cold sweats and panic attacks this is what I call life
I can't drink myself away from his death
What is wrong and what is right someone take me before I do it myself
Death is all life holds for me empty shell of what could have been
Take the step don't be late time to meet him at hells gates
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10633
Posted: December 6, 2002 11:35 PM PST; Last modified: December 7, 2002 3:08 AM PST
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