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Darkness (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
The knife is smooth as I hold it to my wrist Whatever someone did this time has made me pissed I lay the blade down upon my flesh I finally get to understand the meanig of death I drop the knife as blood gushes out I am going to die there is no doubt As I lay dying on the floor I look to see my brother at the door I say good-bye with tears streaming down my face My life is over I've lost this race.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6371
Posted: December 6, 2002 6:20 PM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 6:20 PM PST
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