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What you gave me (Free verse) by highpoet23
Darling beauty I beckon you
to my heart
A place that
once was filled to
capacity with darkness
But ever since you
entered into my
life that darkness
has vanished
I love the
way you smile Beauty,
I love the way
the words roll
of your tongue
And bounce off your ever
so soft lips, Beauty. If I could spend my last day in this ironic one
world
paradise I would spend it with you, Beauty.
Oh how your body language
just propels my feelings
deeper into this vast universe
called love. Yes, I know Beauty
that we have only known each
other for two and a half months
but love needs no limit on time
to appear into our lives. Beauty
please dont hide your emotion.
I want you to share with me your
love, your feelings, your heartache;
I want you to share your life with
me Beauty. Everything you do has a
loving consequence in my life.
Beauty, you are the most beautiful
woman I know and the only woman I
care to know Beauty, between
your deep eye contact stares, your
glances and giggles, I have learned
how to love through you Beauty
teach me more, I need to learn, I
strive to become a master in the
spiritual form of love and I want
you to be my teacher. Stay in
my life Beauty and I will also be
able to teach you something about
devotion and trust something that
revolves around my heart, a stated
place where you will be able to live
out eternity in.
Poet
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Posted: December 2, 2002 8:53 PM PST; Last modified: December 2, 2002 8:53 PM PST
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