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What you gave me (Free verse) by highpoet23
Darling beauty I beckon you to my heart A place that once was filled to capacity with darkness But ever since you entered into my life that darkness has vanished I love the way you smile Beauty, I love the way the words roll of your tongue And bounce off your ever so soft lips, Beauty. If I could spend my last day in this ironic one world paradise I would spend it with you, Beauty. Oh how your body language just propels my feelings deeper into this vast universe called love. Yes, I know Beauty that we have only known each other for two and a half months but love needs no limit on time to appear into our lives. Beauty please dont hide your emotion. I want you to share with me your love, your feelings, your heartache; I want you to share your life with me Beauty. Everything you do has a loving consequence in my life. Beauty, you are the most beautiful woman I know and the only woman I care to know Beauty, between your deep eye contact stares, your glances and giggles, I have learned how to love through you Beauty teach me more, I need to learn, I strive to become a master in the spiritual form of love and I want you to be my teacher. Stay in my life Beauty and I will also be able to teach you something about devotion and trust something that revolves around my heart, a stated place where you will be able to live out eternity in. Poet

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12317
Posted: December 2, 2002 8:53 PM PST; Last modified: December 2, 2002 8:53 PM PST
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