poemranker ::This is Me by MysticalRaven88

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Free verse № 27176

This is Me

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

Blonde hair, Bluegreen eyes, Small and scrawny, A girl I am, but thats all, you seem to see. Skinned knees, Dirty hair, brusied elbows, A girl I am, But thats all, you seem to see. First bike, First fall, First tears, First laughs, A girl I am, But thats all, you seem to see. First boy, First kiss, First love, All seem to exist, A girl I am, But thats all, you seem to see. Broken hearts, Broken promises, Tear stained cheeks, glossy eyes, A girl I am, but thats all, you seem to see. Blonde hair, brown streaks too, bluegreen eyes, glasses, Tall and built, A girl I am, But thats all, you seem to see. Growing up, In this great big world, getting hurt, standing up for myself, taking it one step at a time. A girl I am, but thats all, you seem to see. Cant you see? This is me, take away the looks, the memorys, the happens, the misshaps, the broken words, the stolen kisses, And you still have me, and thats all you need is me. Cant you see.. This is me.. ~Melinda

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4 comments

[0] razorgrin 26-Nov-02/2:48 PM Reply
I see you. I'm not very impressed. those pants make your butt look fat.
[10] deleted user 26-Nov-02/3:33 PM Reply
ummm again very good (attually feelign your poetry makes me feel really bad that im not this good or remotly near it) exclent, please write more!!!
[10] T'ien 26-Nov-02/4:05 PM Reply
i cnt believe it i am becoming a fan of yours thats it send me an autograph
[0] razorgrin 27-Nov-02/1:12 PM Reply
it's like aril lavigne, but even shittier. How exactly is this good poetry?