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This is Me (Free verse) by MysticalRaven88
Blonde hair, Bluegreen eyes, Small and scrawny, A girl I am, but thats all, you seem to see. Skinned knees, Dirty hair, brusied elbows, A girl I am, But thats all, you seem to see. First bike, First fall, First tears, First laughs, A girl I am, But thats all, you seem to see. First boy, First kiss, First love, All seem to exist, A girl I am, But thats all, you seem to see. Broken hearts, Broken promises, Tear stained cheeks, glossy eyes, A girl I am, but thats all, you seem to see. Blonde hair, brown streaks too, bluegreen eyes, glasses, Tall and built, A girl I am, But thats all, you seem to see. Growing up, In this great big world, getting hurt, standing up for myself, taking it one step at a time. A girl I am, but thats all, you seem to see. Cant you see? This is me, take away the looks, the memorys, the happens, the misshaps, the broken words, the stolen kisses, And you still have me, and thats all you need is me. Cant you see.. This is me.. ~Melinda

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.5
Overall Rank: 12819
Posted: November 26, 2002 2:22 PM PST; Last modified: November 26, 2002 2:22 PM PST
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Comments:
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.141.79 | 26-Nov-02/2:48 PM | Reply
I see you. I'm not very impressed. those pants make your butt look fat.
[10] deleted user @ 172.180.38.92 | 26-Nov-02/3:33 PM | Reply
ummm again very good (attually feelign your poetry makes me feel really bad that im not this good or remotly near it) exclent, please write more!!!
[10] T'ien @ 217.46.153.143 | 26-Nov-02/4:05 PM | Reply
i cnt believe it i am becoming a fan of yours thats it send me an autograph
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.45 | 27-Nov-02/1:12 PM | Reply
it's like aril lavigne, but even shittier. How exactly is this good poetry?
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