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The Park

by deano

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

i was walking through the park when i saw a lark it slowly decended towards me gracefully it came closer and closer closer and closer closer then it ate my chips so i shot it

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[10] deleted user 8-Nov-02/6:13 AM Reply
Truly,truly beautiful,I would have shot the little bugger too if it had stolen my chips.10
[10] razorgrin 8-Nov-02/6:50 AM Reply
very nice.
[n/a] deano › razorgrin 17-Dec-02/8:11 AM Reply
I love you Fantastic Freddy
[0] Bobjim 8-Jan-03/3:15 AM Reply
To bad YOU weren't shot. 0