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The Park (Free verse) by deano i was walking through the park
when i saw a lark
it slowly decended towards me
gracefully
it came closer and closer
closer and closer
closer
then it ate my chips
so i shot it
Up the ladder:
Colours
Down the ladder:
the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain
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Posted: November 8, 2002 2:29 AM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2002 2:29 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.2689414 Overall Rank: 13178 Comments:
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deleted user @ 212.219.142.161
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8-Nov-02/6:13 AM
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Truly,truly beautiful,I would have shot the little bugger too if it had stolen my chips.10
very nice.
I love you Fantastic Freddy
To bad YOU weren't shot. 0
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