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The Park (Free verse) by deano
i was walking through the park when i saw a lark it slowly decended towards me gracefully it came closer and closer closer and closer closer then it ate my chips so i shot it

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.2689414
Overall Rank: 13173
Posted: November 8, 2002 2:29 AM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2002 2:29 AM PST
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[10] deleted user @ 212.219.142.161 | 8-Nov-02/6:13 AM | Reply
Truly,truly beautiful,I would have shot the little bugger too if it had stolen my chips.10
[10] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.127 | 8-Nov-02/6:50 AM | Reply
very nice.
[n/a] deano @ 212.219.142.161 > razorgrin | 17-Dec-02/8:11 AM | Reply
I love you Fantastic Freddy
[0] Bobjim @ 212.219.142.161 | 8-Jan-03/3:15 AM | Reply
To bad YOU weren't shot. 0
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