poemranker ::#9 by daniella

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Free verse № 22531

#9

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

distance makes the heart in its solemn steadfast rhythm, drum alone in still rolls. from peaks to lowest plains, space imparts windswept thought in the hollow silence of an absence. the height and breadth of a lonely climb narrows daily to the expanse of the horizon. coming down from within, meet me. come. stand the flatlands of where I stand from the ragged rock of your ascent turn from your axis. look back where I too have been. there descend. that sameness in a path marks the Word He speaks and where to find a foothold, hold fast by my hand since I have heard His command leading to follow.

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[8] Christof 28-Oct-02/3:29 AM Reply
Great opening three stanzas - this poem gives up its meaning after a few reads. It's not immediate, but it draws you in.
[n/a] daniella › Christof 29-Oct-02/7:07 AM Reply
just a tired mountain climber looking for the peak and not yet finding it i guess...