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the UFO and the baby (Haiku) by balthazar
inside, the tube breathes the hatch opens, hisses hot gasp, sweating lungs, gasp!

Up the ladder: Dirty Pops
Down the ladder: moist towelettes

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8333333
Weighted score: 4.1470985
Overall Rank: 13289
Posted: September 27, 2002 6:23 AM PDT; Last modified: September 27, 2002 6:23 AM PDT
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