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Free verse № 16598

Faded

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

I wake up everyday and go through the same motions I know they get me nowhere but they keep me going I wake, work and sleep again My own endless rhythm I want to break my routine But breaking the cycle is harder than it seems I sleep another dreamless night I live another vacant day Slowly, I wish my life away Time will pass Years will change But everything about me will stay the same I will sit back Do nothing And slowly fade away.

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[7] INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/5:17 AM Reply
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