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it's wonderful (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
any where with you is wonderful
you're that little quirk in my smile
'cause I know we'll have each other
for a while
The times we share
are what make our world go 'round
baby you got me and
baby I got you
it's wonderful
but baby I gotta ask,
where are you now
you ain't here
I feel empty with out you
it's breakin' my heart
I want to know, what are you doin'
are you ok
I hope you think and feel the same as me
not knowing is like poison in my veins
i care so much and it's wonderful
my heart is
beating in your back seat
as you drove down the street
I'd say I would give my right arm
to have you with me now
but I'm not mine to give
because you have all of me
and it's wonderful
we're going pell mell
full throttle who knows if
there will be a catastrophic accident
at the end of our road
but baby I could care less
because we are careening out of control
we've given in to what we have
and it is ecstasy, it's wonderful
My heart is pouring out,
red raining down, passion, lust, love,
happiness, contentment, desire
all cascading up and down and out all at once.
not even the Hoover Dam could hold back
what I feel and it's
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8762
Posted: July 10, 2009 1:19 AM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2009 1:19 AM PDT
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