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Repeated Behavior (Free verse) by hobojo
Repeating mistakes Nothing learned Desires not obtained I wander into another tryst But really should abstain Its not that I'm lonely Its not selfishness I'm here only... To finish, to Find To... Not sure why I'm here Again, Not sure where I should go Trying to resolve these feelings Trying to come home

Up the ladder: There sits a chair
Down the ladder: conflagration

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 5.1897035
Overall Rank: 4781
Posted: September 8, 2008 7:05 PM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2008 7:05 PM PDT
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[9] Bethy @ 165.154.46.148 | 12-Sep-08/9:24 AM | Reply
my thoughts exactly...get out of my head...lol
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