poemranker ::not good enough by outoftouch

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not good enough

Member since 2008 · Posted 17 Jun 2008 · 1 comment

She's sitting there, crying her eyes out. The boy she though would always be there, was just another faker. She doesn't need this, what she needs is someone to see her. Believe in her. Understand her. She isn't just someone to settle for, The sky is blue, and the sun shines. But she doesn't she that, for she cant soar, until she realizes that not everything is perfect. She knows she should be doing something more, more than just sitting, and wasting her time crying. She is hoping, wishing, and dreaming, that eventually she'd be good enough for him.

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[2] nentwined 26-Jun-08/8:34 PM Reply
"she doesn't she that" -> "she doesn't see that"
cant -> can't

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This belongs pretty perfectly in the pimple category. It's a common enough place/time/emotion, more for the writer of the poem than anyone else.