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Perfect (Free verse) by misused
A tiny dancer filled with grace
Spins slowly
Her delicate balance untouched
By the vastness of the world
She is perfect
Every turn and bend
Every inch
From her porcelain face to her silk toes
So long as there is music
She spins
Reflecting her flawless beauty to the world
But shut the lid
And all goes silent
Hidden in the shadows
She cries when no oneâs watching
When the music stops
She breaks down
Her face that was at one time perfect
Is now tear-streaked and filled with pain
Her eyes that once shone with excitement
Now scream pleas for help to those who meet them
Her arms
Once held proudly over her head
Now show in bruises and blood how she feels inside
Portrayed to the world
Is this retouched image she produces
Trapped forever in a moment of false ecstasy
But look beyond the closed lid
See the true image of inner torment
And addiction to her sorrow
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8067
Posted: April 3, 2008 8:13 PM PDT; Last modified: April 3, 2008 8:13 PM PDT
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