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The Sidelines (Free verse) by hobojo
It started with a trickle And quickly poured on down It started with a twinkle When I moved into this town And it isn't very easy To watch from these sidelines As he skates on by With that smile As I lust from the inside Courage to speak is Something I lack I am so weak And I have no tact So without words to utter I still watch From these sidelines As life passes me by And I only get to see His smile

Up the ladder: I want my money back
Down the ladder: If you are, I am

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.094852
Overall Rank: 6167
Posted: February 1, 2008 6:33 PM PST; Last modified: February 1, 2008 6:33 PM PST
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