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The pain in Life (Free verse) by Joi
Letting go, distancing emotions reserved, held back, hidden Emptiness inside for a loss is painful this I can not hide Disconnection is not in me Emotional space emptied not to ever be filled prevent oneself from closeness Emptiness inside Fear i can't hide wash it all away detour my mind detour my emotions broken again Words inflict pain affects a persons life the hurt felt down deep inside the pain in life.

Up the ladder: Postcard Made of Pain
Down the ladder: Lifes edge

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Overall Rank: 11432
Posted: August 26, 2007 11:26 PM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2007 11:26 PM PDT
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