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melancholy (Other) by Prince of Void
My head is heavy Heavier than the world Where I live in It seems I’m drunk More than a drunk man Chasing no more dawn Here it seems I’m lost Among waves of sorrow I don’t know What happened to my heart? I just feel pains Nothing to do about it It’s just aching More than man is dying Well agony never ends I’m running and running From the playground To the cold and dark Isolated land After that No more beat again Well my heart is broken Abandoned in the silence Where it’s like a grave Where nothing returns Oh it’s kind of hell Its melancholic world Where everything sadly dies Where skies are always full of tears When she never come back again Whatever I tried I just ended up in this melancholy

Up the ladder: Alone
Down the ladder: Postcard Made of Pain

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Arithmetic Mean: N/A
Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11480
Posted: August 22, 2007 10:46 AM PDT; Last modified: August 22, 2007 10:46 AM PDT
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