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Hopeless Feet (Lyric) by Alex Green
Though the stars came out last night, They only gave off a soft dull light, But we still found our way through my front yard, and into the ominous dark. I'll follow you through every weather, whether we weather it well. I'll be here through sickness and health, through thick and thin, through heaven and hell. So here we are, down this empty street, with no proper guidance for our hopeless feet. Just the glimmer in your eyes, Those beautiful spotlights. Now here we are, See we've come so very far, And all I want to do is to lie right here with you.

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11487
Posted: August 18, 2007 7:42 AM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2007 7:42 AM PDT
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