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7 lines along the shadows of death (Other) by Prince of Void
The unspeakable side of their shadows As they went gently into darkness But on the silver screen they became timeless However they abandoned poems and dreams In their final emptiness That faded out white and then blackness That blackness never ends here In this last chapter of blankness + Michelangelo Antonioni + Ingmar Bergman That was my requiem for those pathless directors

Up the ladder: WASTED
Down the ladder: tile

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Arithmetic Mean: N/A
Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11532
Posted: August 4, 2007 4:00 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2007 4:00 PM PDT
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