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Sunken Treasures (Free verse) by DreamMachine
If romance was an ocean, Would you get lost from land, Tossed into a water of emotions, While you drift out to sea, And if you're tears created these waters, Would your rivers become dreams, That don't seem to fall through, Could it be that in all your crying, It has created these oceans, And rivers that bleed these unstable emotions, But if your heart was a boat, Would you let it get caught out at sea, Or would you learn that this ocean is vast, And know that despite the looks of all these sunken ships, Keep in mind that deep inside the murky waters, There are treasures to be found

Up the ladder: Kept Safe
Down the ladder: Lupus in A Minor

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10084
Posted: September 16, 2002 11:03 AM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2002 11:03 AM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 16-Sep-02/11:40 AM | Reply
Ok! Thanks for the tip!
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