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bacardi, tall glass, lots of ice, diet coke (Senryu) by Skamper
frosty water fights to quench mighty arid thirst hangover persists

Down the ladder: Peter

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8106
Posted: July 11, 2007 2:28 AM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2007 2:28 AM PDT
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[6] Dovina @ 71.39.52.185 | 11-Jul-07/9:50 AM | Reply
"mighty" is just there to get a lucky 7, it seems. In what way is water frosty?
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