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Anthony (Other) by lexxie100
Another couple, story black and white Nothing unusual to see in plain sight Thinking of you, our hands holding tight Having you be the star in my night On and on the day goes by Never letting my heart soar high Yesterday fighting the urge to cry Tomorrow wondering where your heart will lie Hoping to make it through the day Others keeping my thoughts at bay Making my fantasies drift away Attempting to promise my love will stay Still your “first” I will always be Stamping your memory forever onto me Taking my heart hostage and holding the key Always wanting you, I hope that you see Pedaling my way up to quite a long fall Loving another isn’t really easy at all Everything seems duller, the buildings less tall Tumbling my world easy as a ball Opening my soul, letting you be the light Nothing unusual? That’s a far cry from right

Down the ladder: Regterezone: Dosh.

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Arithmetic Mean: N/A
Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11503
Posted: June 27, 2007 5:58 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2007 5:58 PM PDT
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[n/a] Skamper @ 202.6.129.165 | 28-Jun-07/4:31 PM | Reply
where is the unusual? What is it that defines this couple and their lives as being unusual? The story is not so different to everyone's apart from the fact that it's happening to them -
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