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The boomerang holiday (Other) by INTRANSIT
Odd the ornament bends the bough
we heap and trim as we go
through lights and ribbon as if were
enough to hide the visions blur
the snow the slush the wrapping piles
that impede our walk, and the wiles
that lead all to death, not by deed
but by the heft of the genus' need
for water which lies at the foot
full fed by former ag-ed soot
instead of leaving those behind
who would have us bend, but to bind
and dry and crack and shed our health,
those that think us erstwhile kelp
thoughtless as to the cut and drag
that put us high like piney flags
and left behind at twelve days end
no root afoot, no knots that mend
to the floor fallest greenest locks
and dead we're tossed into the box.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6565
Posted: May 5, 2007 3:58 PM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2007 3:58 PM PDT
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those "who" think us . . .
"fallest greenest" is just silly