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Jai guru deva om (Haiku) by Crakyamuni
Nag Hammadi noise speaking of a better world Logos-begotten

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9232
Posted: March 29, 2007 10:33 PM PDT; Last modified: March 29, 2007 10:33 PM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 208.127.114.22 | 30-Mar-07/4:37 PM | Reply
Are you a Beatles fan? "Across the Universe." How that relates to the ancient manuscript, Nag Hammadi, or why it is mere noise, I don't get. The Word or Logos is, I suppose, begotten. Perhaps whatever you mean is too involved for haiku.
[7] Dovina @ 208.127.114.48 > Dovina | 31-Mar-07/7:11 AM | Reply
Noise because we experience the Nag Hammadi manuscript??? Those few who have read it experience it. The rest of us can read translations and interpretations if we want, and can call it noise, but that's bowl's as some say here, I say it's nonsense.

If you hate the Beatles then you're referring to Guru Deva, not their song. I doubt if he would call Nag Hammadi noise.
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