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Oops (Haiku) by John Rambo
He clutches his sac Pulls out the bloody saw blade A bad day at work.
Up the ladder: Let God Unwrite Itself
Down the ladder: Before Departing
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5340
Posted: March 23, 2007 5:35 PM PDT; Last modified: March 23, 2007 5:35 PM PDT
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[9] Skamper @ 202.6.132.194 | 23-Mar-07/9:08 PM | Reply
LMAO...well constructed, story told to great effect!
[9] jessicazee @ 65.30.187.185 | 24-Mar-07/4:51 AM | Reply
I love the word "sac".
[7] richa @ 81.179.219.225 | 25-Mar-07/11:54 AM | Reply
Dear God.
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