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Haiku № 151155

Oops

Member since 2006 · Posted 23 Mar 2007 · 3 comments

He clutches his sac Pulls out the bloody saw blade A bad day at work.

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3 comments

[9] Skamper 23-Mar-07/9:08 PM Reply
LMAO...well constructed, story told to great effect!
[9] jessicazee 24-Mar-07/4:51 AM Reply
I love the word "sac".
[7] richa 25-Mar-07/11:54 AM Reply
Dear God.