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Why (Other) by mango123
I feel so alive
Yet so empty inside a knot in my gut
Are my legs like rubber
and my brain in a fog
Does my spirit soar
And make me giddy inside and
Then drop to where I feel so
lonley I want to die
I feel so incomplete
As if my soul has taken flight
leaving me half a man
I look into her brown eyes
with their healing power
I'm calm except for a racing heart
I'm at peace the knot melts away
My soul is whole again
We have become one flesh one being
The words flowing the mind inmeshed.
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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11539
Posted: March 14, 2007 9:07 PM PDT; Last modified: March 14, 2007 9:07 PM PDT
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