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One More Try (Lyric) by Miggy
I’d fly thousands of miles just to see your face again The one who only understood me more than a friend Jokes said out loud, stories told around And believe life’s worries were pretend But I did those sins and God I left you for dead (Chorus) I made a couple mistakes and we had to pay the price I wasn’t the only one for you wronged me once or twice Yet my heart feels the pain of not having you by my side I wish you take me back for at least one more try Vividly remember the nights we were staring face to face I made fun at your little giggles about my awkward grace Hand-in-hand, upon the sand And in our mouths we had each other taste Nevertheless my faults would make it go to waste (Chorus) I am undaunted by this past Another try to make what we had last One last hope to let it all end well And for you to lead me out of this lonely hell (Chorus/ Ending)

Up the ladder: madness
Down the ladder: Peter

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8113
Posted: March 9, 2007 11:16 PM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2007 11:16 PM PST
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