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My Heart (Free verse) by unouluvme
And she is buried there, beneath the wooden wind chimes that (when the breeze comes) jingle with a deep sorrowful ring, the melody of the xylophones that sings me to sleep at night.

Up the ladder: Mist
Down the ladder: And She Came Back

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9210
Posted: January 1, 2007 12:16 AM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2007 12:16 AM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 75.82.85.162 | 1-Jan-07/11:56 AM | Reply
The title seems distant from the subject, makes me wonder who or what is buried.
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