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Those eyes have dreams (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey
Those Eyes Have Dreams Those eyes have dreams But they are covered in ice- Those eyes have dreams But I can't melt through- They're special and pretty There is only one thing to do- I try to stare really hard to see the pain All I see is the shadows lurking in your veins- I see the demons reflecting their anger They try to tell me something- I know that there is a thin line between love and hate That scares me- But those eyes have dreams You have to fight the demons- Let me love you so much You can melt the ice with your warm tears- Let the demons out Because those pretty eyes have dreams

Up the ladder: Lucky
Down the ladder: no big box to live in

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8308
Posted: December 15, 2006 1:17 PM PST; Last modified: December 15, 2006 1:17 PM PST
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