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lNoOvTe (Free verse) by fiefofum
hold her tight man dont you know men hold women they want forever tight as the first time you had sex with a virgin but she is so much better this time you hold her tight by her breasts so small so beautiful

Up the ladder: My Castle
Down the ladder: Soccer

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3338
Posted: October 11, 2006 4:55 PM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2006 4:55 PM PDT
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[n/a] fiefofum @ 86.41.204.214 | 11-Oct-06/4:56 PM | Reply
definately not
[8] nypoet22 @ 72.144.83.149 > fiefofum | 12-Oct-06/6:29 PM | Reply
please spell definitely correctly.

cute poem though.
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