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Love Till the End (Free verse) by swat472 We all live together
one big place
so love your family and friends
remember their sweet face
You might lose them someday
to terrorist freaks
so help stop them
by standing proud at the peaks
Love one another
theres no use to fight
love our sweet country
thru day and thru night
Never forget me
or all your friends
you don't know what will happen
so love till the end
Up the ladder:
Death
Down the ladder:
Friendship
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Posted: September 12, 2002 11:40 AM PDT; Last modified: September 12, 2002 11:40 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.9444444 Overall Rank: 13416 Comments:
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pete @ 194.222.69.43
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14-Sep-02/2:22 AM
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a bit greetings cardy .... heart's in almost the right place though , i think ..... 3
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