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Late Break (Other) by MacFrantic
I don't think a poet anymore I want to be I don't think over this and that I want to cry I'm tired I'm disappointed I'm nauseous with worry I don't know if much as I should I love you as I don't know if what you're saying I will ever hear I'll lie I'll deconstruct I'll leave you in the rain

Up the ladder: parlor games
Down the ladder: Nature

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8867
Posted: June 22, 2006 6:22 PM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2006 6:22 PM PDT
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[8] Ranger @ 81.152.176.220 | 28-Jun-06/2:29 PM | Reply
Other than 'deconstruct' this is excellent. Very tidy indeed.
[n/a] MacFrantic @ 71.208.115.199 > Ranger | 28-Jun-06/7:33 PM | Reply
I rather liked 'deconstruct,' as it lent itself well to the structure. Thank you very much.
[8] Ranger @ 86.131.51.97 > MacFrantic | 1-Jul-06/12:02 AM | Reply
I get what you mean, it has never been a word to appeal to me poetically though. But, as lots of people say, each to their own.
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