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Late Break

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Jun 2006 · 3 comments

I don't think a poet anymore I want to be I don't think over this and that I want to cry I'm tired I'm disappointed I'm nauseous with worry I don't know if much as I should I love you as I don't know if what you're saying I will ever hear I'll lie I'll deconstruct I'll leave you in the rain

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[8] Ranger 28-Jun-06/2:29 PM Reply

Other than 'deconstruct' this is excellent. Very tidy indeed.

[n/a] MacFrantic › Ranger 28-Jun-06/7:33 PM Reply

I rather liked 'deconstruct,' as it lent itself well to the structure. Thank you very much.

[8] Ranger › MacFrantic 1-Jul-06/12:02 AM Reply

I get what you mean, it has never been a word to appeal to me poetically though. But, as lots of people say, each to their own.