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Ice (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Might tightly turn 'round to see what you see
seeing everything in front of me
it's stunning
numbing
Obstacles are ice walls and pitfalls pouring
growing holes into my frozen face as I decide
where to put the void I've been holding onto
My my
Whatever and what more will I do
to spend your luck in wilting heights
and wonder what I shall too
In dying November I remember lasting winter nights
the smallest world of frosted snow
for dull September lights
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8259
Posted: June 15, 2006 9:54 PM PDT; Last modified: June 15, 2006 9:54 PM PDT
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