poemranker ::Looking Up, Seeing Grey by Enkidu

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Looking Up, Seeing Grey

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Jun 2006 · 0 comments

In the right lane percussion In the left lane discussion I passed a flock of penguins going east I delivered a death blow to the stormy beast If each spot of thunder strikes If clouded lightning likes I'll commiserate with your walls I'll debate your maddened squalls

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