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Looking Up, Seeing Grey (Free verse) by Enkidu In the right lane percussion
In the left lane discussion
I passed a flock of penguins going east
I delivered a death blow to the stormy beast
If each spot of thunder strikes
If clouded lightning likes
I'll commiserate with your walls
I'll debate your maddened squalls
Up the ladder:
H8
Down the ladder:
I'M
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Posted: June 6, 2006 11:42 AM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2006 11:42 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.762871 Overall Rank: 11442 142 view(s)
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