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When You Wish (Free verse) by Enkidu
I watched a star
It wasnât really shooting
More sinking, drooping
Sucking the light
From the sky it passed
As it broke the horizon
Dropping fast
I wished upon the star
To wonder
Like a child
Bright and younger
And to my satisfaction
Found the other
Stars to follow that
falling, shooting star
That keeps my mind
Doubting, hollow
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Posted: June 2, 2006 11:21 AM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2006 11:21 AM PDT
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