poemranker ::Just a Year by italenrico

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Free verse № 142824

Just a Year

Member since 2006 · Posted 30 Apr 2006 · 0 comments

cold cigarette butts in the ashtray remind me of you; how we both smoked two packs a day way back when before my lungs couldn't take it you cut back with me. lying in bed in the place I found you reminds me of the first time we kissed way back when your innocence, I can still taste it on my lips if I try. albums of pictures of the life we built together; the promises we thought we'd always keep way back when before I skipped your funeral in order to get high.

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