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Downpour (Free verse) by annadoc Shaken to the core
no need to state more
Keep head held high,
and standing tall,
into one's life the rain must fall;
but oh, tell me, must it be a
"perpetual" downpour?
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Posted: April 17, 2006 4:00 PM PDT; Last modified: April 17, 2006 4:00 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8577223 Overall Rank: 10403 Comments:
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pollywolly @ 80.192.49.144
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18-Apr-06/4:05 AM
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i think a better quality of poem could have been written by focusing on the final line but so much has been said in a short piece where live feels like a continous downpour
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