Downpour

Member since 2006 · Posted 17 Apr 2006 · 1 comment

Shaken to the core no need to state more Keep head held high, and standing tall, into one's life the rain must fall; but oh, tell me, must it be a "perpetual" downpour?

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[4] pollywolly 18-Apr-06/4:05 AM Reply

i think a better quality of poem could have been written by focusing on the final line but so much has been said in a short piece where live feels like a continous downpour