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Untitled (Free verse) by swift_enterprises
It's a kind of dying No passing fantasy Antennae waving in the wet wind Soaking up stuff it's not enough To sustain life on this particular planet Or is it bread alone It's always alone

Up the ladder: The toilet
Down the ladder: stupid

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0666666
Weighted score: 4.1779227
Overall Rank: 13246
Posted: May 10, 2002 3:14 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 3:14 PM PDT
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[4] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 12-May-02/8:21 PM | Reply
eh?
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