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Old (Free verse) by richsaun
He sit in his chair
No remembering
Wife gone
Friends gone
Nearly gone
He sit in his chair
He wishing
Burning desire
Youth again
Health again
Life again
He sit in his chair
Withered and weary
Nothing left
Pain surround him
Death take him away
Happy again
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Overall Rank: 10630
Posted: September 8, 2002 10:58 AM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2002 10:58 AM PDT
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