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Old (Free verse) by richsaun
He sit in his chair No remembering Wife gone Friends gone Nearly gone He sit in his chair He wishing Burning desire Youth again Health again Life again He sit in his chair Withered and weary Nothing left Pain surround him Death take him away Happy again

Up the ladder: choices unto death
Down the ladder: The Social Muse

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10630
Posted: September 8, 2002 10:58 AM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2002 10:58 AM PDT
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