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solving the world's problems through poetry (Free verse) by skaskowski that callow young man contoured to
the corner of the shop,
and blew his bargain bin darts
through the star charts,
laden with shallow brain farts.
reads his notes from the back of a pen,
so, "bic," he says "and i was made in
india."
Up the ladder:
Summer Loving
Down the ladder:
An unfinished lyric
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Posted: November 3, 2005 2:09 AM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2005 2:09 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6438 Comments:
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zodiac @ 217.144.7.195
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3-Nov-05/3:27 AM
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The first two lines are good. The last three too.
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skaskowski @ 70.225.166.245
> zodiac
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3-Nov-05/10:21 AM
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thank ya
Funny, and true to the title.
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