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I thought we were meant to be (Free verse) by trev086
Out of every grain of sand Out of every fish in the sea You were the only one who was meant for me You said you loved me, I said it too How should I have known that the me was a he My heart was crushed my eyes were wet If I were to paint a picture it???d be the best silhouette I felt like a feather just sifting through the air Oh my life with out you is just so bare You tell me to get over it and I hold in my tears I can???t handle this mess for another hundred more years The woman I thought you were was all just a hoax The tears in my eyes have started to shine The love I had for you was just a waste of time ~Trevor Greene

Up the ladder: A missing puzzle piece
Down the ladder: Kept Safe

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10082
Posted: September 4, 2002 6:09 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2002 6:09 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 4-Sep-02/8:41 PM | Reply
When I read this poeme, I wanted to clap. But instead I tugged into a bap. And while you may avert your eyes, you'll not taste finer than my Bap Surprise.
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