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broken thought (Free verse) by spoink
thanks for the lemons thanks for the head thanks for the salve and the drawing paper and the chocolate wafers and for looking good once and a while. its been five months of hell and now i must

Up the ladder: Life's Great Irony
Down the ladder: Love and negotiations

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.357143
Weighted score: 4.5300336
Overall Rank: 12724
Posted: May 10, 2002 9:47 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 9:47 AM PDT
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Comments:
[7] silvertongueddevil @ | 11-May-02/4:53 AM | Reply
ends suddenly, but was going well. thank you for not using the *h* or the *s* words in a love poem.
[5] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 14-May-02/3:37 AM | Reply
:heh:
[3]... anonymous @ 62.254.32.4 | 19-May-02/10:36 AM | Reply
self-obsessed
what are you on??
don't believe you mean a word of this, maybe lemons only
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