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Free verse № 1318

broken thought

by spoink

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 3 comments

thanks for the lemons thanks for the head thanks for the salve and the drawing paper and the chocolate wafers and for looking good once and a while. its been five months of hell and now i must

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3 comments

[7] silvertongueddevil 11-May-02/4:53 AM Reply
ends suddenly, but was going well. thank you for not using the *h* or the *s* words in a love poem.
[5] nentwined 14-May-02/3:37 AM Reply
:heh:
[3] anonymous 19-May-02/10:36 AM Reply
self-obsessed
what are you on??
don't believe you mean a word of this, maybe lemons only