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A few poems to look at (Lyric) by poetchrisk
These are two poems that I wrote the other night.....
First time I've seen you in awhile/
seeing you reconfirmed the feelings that I try to stifle/
I remember oh so well the good times we had/
and I'm glad that I'm reminded of the beautifulness of your smile/
since we broke up....
I have been desperately wanting you/
we loved each other....
no matter what anyone else says we know it's true/
The mornings we shared after sleeping were magic/
we started off heavenly
but the outcome of us was sad and tragic/
I have no real feelings of regret/
and it was great to let your love fill my heart/
It's not that simple but I wish we could go back to the start
and do everything over again/
cause when we were done
I not only lost my love...
but my best friend/
This is the 2nd one......
Being apart from love teaches you how to appreciate what you once had/
apart from love is not something I'd wish on my worst enemy/
I am apart from love
and for a few months now/
I wonder when it will come back to me and how?/
How will I know that it's right?/
when since the night my love was lost
I haven't been the same/
the pain that sprints through my veins/
has no intention of stopping and I have no control of the reins/
free flowing at it's own disposal
it'll stay with me no matter where I go/
and now that I've seen my love...
the pain rears it's ugly face and trys to show/
that's it's best to grow from that love/
if 2 people are meant to be together ...
they will when it's time to go above/
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Posted: October 7, 2005 8:09 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2005 8:09 AM PDT
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