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A few poems to look at (Lyric) by poetchrisk
These are two poems that I wrote the other night..... First time I've seen you in awhile/ seeing you reconfirmed the feelings that I try to stifle/ I remember oh so well the good times we had/ and I'm glad that I'm reminded of the beautifulness of your smile/ since we broke up.... I have been desperately wanting you/ we loved each other.... no matter what anyone else says we know it's true/ The mornings we shared after sleeping were magic/ we started off heavenly but the outcome of us was sad and tragic/ I have no real feelings of regret/ and it was great to let your love fill my heart/ It's not that simple but I wish we could go back to the start and do everything over again/ cause when we were done I not only lost my love... but my best friend/ This is the 2nd one...... Being apart from love teaches you how to appreciate what you once had/ apart from love is not something I'd wish on my worst enemy/ I am apart from love and for a few months now/ I wonder when it will come back to me and how?/ How will I know that it's right?/ when since the night my love was lost I haven't been the same/ the pain that sprints through my veins/ has no intention of stopping and I have no control of the reins/ free flowing at it's own disposal it'll stay with me no matter where I go/ and now that I've seen my love... the pain rears it's ugly face and trys to show/ that's it's best to grow from that love/ if 2 people are meant to be together ... they will when it's time to go above/

Up the ladder: this tuesday morning
Down the ladder: It destroyed my life

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10738
Posted: October 7, 2005 8:09 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2005 8:09 AM PDT
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