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incomplete (Other) by Prince of Void
Shadows bother the light Desires storm the mind Fears grow among the face of the night Death is still wandering by my side Myths are consumed by music They have taken the soul inside -of me Released it in the heart of haunted sight I am Left within paces of pathless dreams Could I trace the trace of the traceless? When I have gone placeless

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8094
Posted: October 5, 2005 10:21 PM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2005 10:21 PM PDT
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[10] zodiac @ 213.186.184.106 | 8-Oct-05/3:57 AM | Reply
Isn't "incomplete" another word for "with a void"?
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