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my head is a madhouse (Free verse) by daggatolar my head is a madhouse
louding an ovation beyond
my own comprehension
how do i tell the tale of hell
intermiggling and conspiring
to make my senses
a member of this madhouse
that has chosen my head
its resting place.
Up the ladder:
Whatâs this sound is killing me
Down the ladder:
Strangers
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Posted: October 5, 2005 1:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2005 1:07 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9297 Comments:
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ObsequiousGem @ 24.255.44.236
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9-Oct-05/2:30 AM
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Beautiful flow, choice of words, language, and verse.
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