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Rescue My Heart (Free verse) by pletcgm
Since we first met,
My heart has raced like a vet.
You have given me something,
Something I call true love.
As the time has passed
My heart has amassed,
Amassed with many feelings,
Feelings I want to express.
As my heart is at its crest,
My brain has regressed,
Regressed to the stage,
Where you are at the top of the page.
Now is a time for rescue,
As my heart is on this silver platter,
I ask this of you.
Please rescue my heart.
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Arithmetic Mean: 0.5
Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11276
Posted: September 22, 2005 8:08 PM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2005 8:08 PM PDT
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