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Rescue My Heart (Free verse) by pletcgm
Since we first met, My heart has raced like a vet. You have given me something, Something I call true love. As the time has passed My heart has amassed, Amassed with many feelings, Feelings I want to express. As my heart is at its crest, My brain has regressed, Regressed to the stage, Where you are at the top of the page. Now is a time for rescue, As my heart is on this silver platter, I ask this of you. Please rescue my heart.

Up the ladder: motivated
Down the ladder: untitled 2

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.5
Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11267
Posted: September 22, 2005 8:08 PM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2005 8:08 PM PDT
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[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.251.165 | 23-Sep-05/3:58 PM | Reply
'Amassed with many feelings'?
[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.251.165 | 23-Sep-05/3:59 PM | Reply
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